hey Jebb - the set-up works very nicely - though I notice our script refers to 'an instrument' after the guitar, which is frustratingly non-committal. Also - it's still not super clear WHY the girl gets the idea to use the contraption in her parlour? Is it because, for instance, one of the horns is now blowing air into the man's face, because somekind of auto-bellows mechanism has malfunction? Is it because mud from the garden is not being suctioned up by the gadget and applied to the guy's face, like somekind of dispenser? Time to deal with the specifics!
hey Jebb - the set-up works very nicely - though I notice our script refers to 'an instrument' after the guitar, which is frustratingly non-committal. Also - it's still not super clear WHY the girl gets the idea to use the contraption in her parlour? Is it because, for instance, one of the horns is now blowing air into the man's face, because somekind of auto-bellows mechanism has malfunction? Is it because mud from the garden is not being suctioned up by the gadget and applied to the guy's face, like somekind of dispenser? Time to deal with the specifics!
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