The images below are a series of thumbnails depicting several scenes of the book excerpts from 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea, including an ocean chasm, a kelp forest and a shallow sandy plain.
39 is standing out more to me because of the foreground element which allows your image to be split up into a perspective nicely.
However I think that 40 to 43 are a little hard to make out and understand. I presume these are the sandy chasm?
Perhaps try to think more about the scale. For example; 41 has a good idea representing the shallowness, but in contrast of the size of the ocean, shallow doesn't necessarily have to mean in comparison to human height unless it states that within your extract. So maybe you could create a perspective which reflects light from above shining down into the water at the chasm which in turn could develop a nice 'depth' in terms of shallowness but could also create an interesting atmosphere and overall image? Just a thought :)
39 is standing out more to me because of the foreground element which allows your image to be split up into a perspective nicely.
ReplyDeleteHowever I think that 40 to 43 are a little hard to make out and understand. I presume these are the sandy chasm?
Perhaps try to think more about the scale. For example; 41 has a good idea representing the shallowness, but in contrast of the size of the ocean, shallow doesn't necessarily have to mean in comparison to human height unless it states that within your extract. So maybe you could create a perspective which reflects light from above shining down into the water at the chasm which in turn could develop a nice 'depth' in terms of shallowness but could also create an interesting atmosphere and overall image? Just a thought :)